Friday, January 8, 2016

Lone Star Dispatch Issue 3

News Story: New absence policy in effect this year
This story is about the new attendance policy AISD has made for the district, stating that students have to be at school 90% of the year. Being home sick, and going to family events is now counted against students as an unexcused absence.

Who was quoted in the story?
Kathy Ryan, Susan Leos, Lawrence Britton, Anita Yem, and Danielle Bryant. 
What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
"I think the biggest concern is that students and families may have a hard time understanding there really are few reasons why a students can miss school/class and it be excused. they have been used to these other reasons being 'automatically' waived," Ryan said. 

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
Yes it did. 

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
It was a quote. 

Commentary Story: Growing panic for school safety
This story talks about all the terrorism in the world today and how it is effecting schools. Students should consider school as a safe environment, but with all the terrorism these days school may have to step up the security. 

Who was quoted in the story?
Nobody

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
There was no quotes in the story

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
The lead sentence made me have some interest, but I fell like it could have more. 
Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
It was a statement.

Student Life Story: WWII lives on with Yeager's collection
This story is about senior Jack Yeager who has a passion for WWII. Yeager has been interested in history since he was little and now he collects things and does reenactments for others about WWII.

Who was quoted in the story?
Jake Yeager, Tyler Perkins, Michael Stroud, and Frank Yeager.

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
"We put on show 'battles' for the public and give weapons demos and lessons to the public about WWII," Yeager said. 

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
This lead sentence did not make me want to keep reading the story, the title is what got me interested. 

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
It was a quote. 

Entertainment Story: 
This story explains how the advanced commercial photography class took a photo shoot of teachers kids for there final exam. The students of this class got to choose the topic of taking a shoot of babies for the christmas holiday, the students had to create all their props and they had to set up their lighting for their final exam as well as taking pictures. 

Who was quoted in the story?
Chanel Henry, Brenda Saucedo, and Aubrey Choate.

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
"Overall, this was one of my favorite activities in the class and it's special to be ale to have such a real world experience with clients," Saucedo said. 
Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
Yes it did. 
Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
It was a quote. 

Athletics Story: Soccer team 'kicks' into gear
This soccer is about the soccer season and how it has started. It includes what you should do to make the soccer team. 

Who was quoted in the story?
Ryan Logan, Hayley Farr, Whitney Johnson, and Coach Hoffman.

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
"Give it all you've got, you cannot hold anything back. you only have a limited amount of time for the coaches to see you. Another thing the coaches like to see is not just your talent but also your attitude. If you do not have a good attitude coaches will not want to put up with you. be respectful and a team player," Farr said.

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
Yes it did. 

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
It was a quote. 

In-Depth Story: Senior fights a life-long disease with no sign of a cure 
This story is about a girl named Katy Jacobs who suffers from an incurable diabetes. This disease although sad does not keep Jacobs from living her life to the fullest. 

Who was quoted in the story?
Katy Jacobs, Bryn Williams, Summer Hawkins, and Gary Jacobs.

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
"The fact that she can not only lie life beyond how others choose to, but also make light of her situations is so amazing to me," Williams said.

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
Yes it did.

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
It was a quote. 

1. My favorite photo is the combat surrender one that goes along with the store, WWII live on with Yeager's collection. 
1a.This is my favorite photo because of the way it is lined up. The person is directly in the center and the background is a little blurred out. I think the photographer did a great job of taking the picture at the right moment, and I like that it is in black and white. I like that because it goes along with the story well. 

2. My least favorite photo is the blood work one, going along with the story, Senior fights a life-long disease with no sign of a cure. 
2a. This is my least favorite photo because the angle is awkward. The colors are not the best and in my opinion they could have gotten a different perspective of how this could be portrayed.

3. I would like to take pictures for the, Bees find a sweet home on campus story. 

4. I would rate the photography a 6 out of 10 because I believe all the stories could have photos captured with a different concept. The photos also could have had a few different angles, most things were centered right in the middle. 

Brainstorming task:
I think that a cool topic that should be covered in the newspaper should be youth groups that are students attend. I know many students that have many different religions and many of there churches have youth groups. I would be cool to learn what the youth groups do and where the activities happen. 
Jordan Haschke would be a person you could interview for this story because she is religious and she attends youth groups for her church. Jordan is very involved in her church and she knows a lot of other resources for other people you could use for interviews. 

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